tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post2386262901759282184..comments2020-08-18T02:19:54.849-07:00Comments on A Hermit on the Dance Floor: Tales of Moni - Chapter IAsher Jesudosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13101030538130246768noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-88641758400439203812013-04-20T06:55:14.830-07:002013-04-20T06:55:14.830-07:00man, that's probably the best compliment I hav...man, that's probably the best compliment I have received till date. thanks a lot for the encouragement :)God bless you!!Asher Jesudosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13101030538130246768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-30804015038428774582013-04-20T03:40:28.348-07:002013-04-20T03:40:28.348-07:00Brilliant stuff! I don't know you, but it sure...Brilliant stuff! I don't know you, but it sure looks like you're going to go on to become a popular AND critically acclaimed writer.<br /><br />Moving on to Part 2!Kunalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05371866024863205127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-74267351946919951372013-04-06T05:53:13.944-07:002013-04-06T05:53:13.944-07:00Thanks for the encouragement, atthai :). I plan to...Thanks for the encouragement, atthai :). I plan to write a series of blogs around this story in continuation, and eventually collate it into a novel with an aim to get it published. So, all sorts of feedback is welcome. The aim is to refine and polish so that the end product is as good as it gets. The second chapter is out btw. :)Asher Jesudosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13101030538130246768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-78222683901954136622013-04-06T05:45:16.467-07:002013-04-06T05:45:16.467-07:00like the title says, "the not so fictional ad...like the title says, "the not so fictional adventures of..." :D of course, there is some story-telling involved :)Asher Jesudosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13101030538130246768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-29262283195357676282013-04-05T21:01:34.914-07:002013-04-05T21:01:34.914-07:00Did all this really happen, or have you taken some...Did all this really happen, or have you taken some liberties with the facts to make a good story? Very engaging and makes me want to read more and that in essence is how writers are born.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02343420146394315809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-11613209651057704892013-04-04T10:40:50.493-07:002013-04-04T10:40:50.493-07:00I've tweaked the order a bit. any better now?I've tweaked the order a bit. any better now?Asher Jesudosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13101030538130246768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2303115960231596792.post-35955729157691922072013-04-04T08:39:58.006-07:002013-04-04T08:39:58.006-07:00well written...would like a crisper start.jailed f...well written...would like a crisper start.jailed for long hair!!!!!horrifying ya!<br />Adi aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06348070513637839242noreply@blogger.com